Saturday, August 6, 2011

Is this a good beginning for a book?

This was a great start! I saw some little typos but that of course probably wasn't your fault ;) anyways I did enjoy the beginning it even had pulled me in a bit. I think it's a great start and you should keep it up just make sure to proof read and keep adding detail. Try and engage the reader with the rest like you did me

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